Seeking magnificence in this life of Illusion
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Check the link to a short story piece I wrote awhile back. I’d love to hear your thoughts. This was my first foray into Flash Fiction in quite awhile.
Smoke and Mirrors/When the Magic Fails
Thanks!
Cheryl
Cheryl, this was a very good story. It invoked feelings of sadness, and it was somewhat comical. It's a situation I could see playing out and the interplay between these men is real and understandable. I enjoyed this, very much.
Thanks Dan. I’m glad you enjoyed it.😀
Edgy can be difficult to pull off but you did a great job. I love stories that make me think. Thank you
Thanks Pam. I hoped you’d like it. 🙂
I love hearing your thoughts!
Cheryl, this was a very good story. It invoked feelings of sadness, and it was somewhat comical. It's a situation I could see playing out and the interplay between these men is real and understandable. I enjoyed this, very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dan. I’m glad you enjoyed it.😀
ReplyDeleteEdgy can be difficult to pull off but you did a great job. I love stories that make me think. Thank you
ReplyDeleteThanks Pam. I hoped you’d like it. 🙂
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